Review 32 of ForEST Article 62

ForEST Article 62 Info
Status	Active
Title	Gravitational Energy
Corresponding Author	fmyhr
Purpose	To define gravitational energy.

ForEST Article Review 32 Info
Reviewer	kmyhr
Review Date	2000-10-22
Coverage Score	How well does the article cover the topic described in its purpose? How appropriate is its level of detail?	(0 - 10) 8
Technical Score	How technically accurate is the information presented in the article?	(0 - 10) N/A
Style Score	How clearly written is the article? How good are its grammar and spelling? How appropriate is its tone?	(0 - 10) 6

Text Comments	This is a good article with a lot of inforamtion and interesting examples. It is pretty complicated. I would have to read it several times before I really got it all, especially as a new student. You included in the text that energy is force times distance. It would be helpful to include that as an equation to link equations 2 and 3. Even though you said it above, there is a lot to remember, and having it as equation too would be helpful. To get from 4a to 4b it would be helpful to include the equation for kinetic energy or link to another article that explains it, and has an equation.